Description Draft Two

My Best Friend

I have a good friend, Nicole Zhong,who I have made for over five years. She is from Chou-Zou, Pingtung county.

Nicole was born in a happy family with five members. She is a senior of National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology, majoring in English. She lives in the school dormitory. In this summer vacation, she went to Japan for study. She stayed there about three weeks. She wrote a postcard to me and said it was a nice trip. She made a lot of new friends, visited some temples, and took hot-springs. In the future, she wants to become an English teacher or a tour guide. She is very good at speaking. She is not afraid of showing herself.

In Nicole’s free time, she likes to go shopping with her boyfriend. Sometimes she watches some band shows. She said music can inspire her spirit.

Nicole is a nice girl who I admire. She always gives me her useful suggestion when I has some problems. I can see that she tried her best to reach her goals and believe hard working brings her success.

Description Draft one

I have a good friend, Nicole Zhong who I have met for over five years. She is from 潮州, Pingtung county.
Nicole was born in a happy family with five members. She is a senior of National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology. She lives in the school’s dormitory. Her major is Applied Foreign Languages. In this summer vacation, she went to Japan for studying. She stayed there about three weeks. She wrote a postcard to me and said it was a nice trip. For example, she met a lot of new friends, visiting some temples, and taking hot-springs. In the future, she wants to become an English teacher or a tour guide. She is really good at speaking. She is not afraid of showing herself.
In Nicole’s free time, she likes go shopping with her boyfriend. Sometime she watches some band shows. She said music can inspire her spirit.
Nicole is a nice girl who I admire. She always gave me her useful suggestion when I had some problems. I can see that she tried her best to reach her goals. I believe her efforts has biggest chance of success.

Interview (outline)

1. Main Idea
Who-Nicole Zhong
When-I was 18 years old.
Where-In a cram school

2. Body
Born in 潮州, Pingtung County, 22 years old
There are five members in her family.
A forth year student of National Kaohsiung First University of Science and Technology
She lives in the school’s dormitory.
Her major is Apply foreign Language
She has ever been to Japan for short studying.
In her free time, she likes to go shopping with her boy friend.
In the future, she want’s to be an English teacher or a tour guide.

Writer’s personal reactions：
Nicole is a nice girl who I admire.
She always gave me her useful suggestion when I had some problems.
Although we can see each other very often, we sometimes chat on the MSN
We have a lot in common such as admiring the same idol, Lee-hom Wang, loving English…
3. Conclusion
From you, I learned a lot of things.
No matter where you are, I hope we can stay in touch with each other.

combine sentences

1. Chihuahua is divided into regions which are a mountains area in the west and a desert basin in the north and east is the largest Mexican State.
2. Disney World, an amusement park in Orlando Florida covers a large area of land which includes lakes, golf courses, campsites, hotels, and wildlife preserve.
3. Jamaica, the third largest island in the Caribbean Sea is one of the world’s leading producers of bauxite, an ore which is Aluminum made from.
4. Robert Ballard, an oceanographer made headings in 1985 and discovered the remains of the Titanic, the “unsinkable” passenger ship which has rested on the floor of the Atlantic Ocean since 1912 and struck and iceberg.
5. William Shakespeare’s father, John Shakespeare was a glove maker and a town official and owned a shop in Stratford-upon-Avon about 75 miles northwest of London.
6. The Republic of Yemen is an ancient land at the southwestern tip of the Arabian Peninsula that has been host to many prosperous civilizations includes the Kingdom of Sheba and various Islamic empires.

Shrimp Fried Rice

Making tasty shrimp fried rice is not difficult. Just follow the directions below. I believe everyone can make delicious shrimp fried rice by yourself.
Before you start to cook this dish, you have to prepare all of the ingredients you need. Such as fresh shrimps, a bowl of rice, some cabbage, sliced pork, black peppers, and a little salt. When everything is ready, let’s start.
First, add some oil after heat the pan to 60 degree. Put some garlic and a bowl of rice into the pan. Next, fry them until you see the garlic become brown. You put shrimps, pork, and cabbage in the pan together. Fry them again and wait until all of the ingredients are mixed and well-done. Third, turn a fire smaller before you sprinkle black peppers and salt. You also can add some soy sauce. It must be tastier and look yummier.
By following those directions, you can find cooking is not difficult especially making shrimp fried rice.

How a breakfast cereal is made

Cereal is a tasty food for breakfast. Now let me talk about how to make it. First, the wheat is harvested from the field. Next, it is transported to the silos. Third, it is stored in the silos. And then, the grain is cooked to soften it. Fourth, it is cut and formed into thin strips. Fifth, these are woven into biscuits. After that, each biscuit is baked until brown. At last, it is packed ready to be eaten.